Lady Sydney

Lexis! Hey!! ...yes, i know this weird girl, guys. -.- *sish* Unfortuanately. lol JK!!! Welcomes to YWS, Lexikins! *tacklehugs* See ya! Haha! MY lollipop! You really were jealous, though, I ...

Oooo. Cannibalism! Very interesting; I wasn't expecting that. The beginning image of Tea was detailed very well, and I love how she's so spunky. Ryian scares me. :shock: And I ...

Verrrrrry good, Vernon. I love Quinn, next to Tea that is. She's so great! I love her in her drunken state as well, it's really funny and entertaining. Hehe! I ...

That was really good for your first poem. :D I enjoyed it. The detail and description and such. I'm not really a poet, so I don't know if it is ...

I s my ceiling actually...moving?,’ I think as my eyes slowly begin to open. My candle chandelier sways above my bed, as though I am on a ship, and dust ...

Well that chapter was pretty.........interesting. :shock: Poor Tea!! :cry: She goes through so much crap. Her and the rest of her family!! It's not fair. But, 'tis life. I agree ...

Ah yes. Alas, Quinn's identity is revealed! Everything fit very nicely in place. Have I read this one already? No. No, I don't think I have. *shrugs* Ah well. 'Twas ...

Very nice, Vernon. It suits the story very well!! I like how you've tied Jared's past in with the story. Nice touch! ^_^ Once again, as I say usually, there ...

This is something I wrote for a writing contest. I won! YAY! But, I want your input on it. Thank you! ^_^ ------- Skyla, wake up, little one." Whispered the ...

OM freaking G!!! I can't believe I've never noticed this before! I love it! You did a very nice job on capturing the feelings that go one through a teenager's, ...

"Where is he? Where is he? Where is he?" I fiddle nervously with my white gloves. Unconsciously, I roughly tear my gloves from my fingers, exposing my bone thin fingers ...

Well...you DID say that this was your first time. Mkay. Where to begin? Where to begin? Um... ok. I'll start with saying that you should probably work on your structure. ...

I love your poem, Tigger Tigg, and I'm not just saying that because I'm your girlfriend. I mean that honestly. My only suggestion to you would be, as DD told ...

was...different. I liked it and all, but I didn't really FEEL it. You know? Also, you also have quite a few spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. My suggestion: Again, proofread ...

Mkay. This actually DOES a have a good backround, plot, idea, WHATEVER you wanna call it. The only thing I would suggest is that you watch your punctuation and spelling ...